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I really dig your sounds. My only complaint is that you've got a bit of distortion and clipping going on in parts of the track. A lot of potential, though.

statichazard responds:

Thank you Ill work on it :)

I started in hip hop, so I definitely appreciate your lines. It tells a story, and your backing vocals were reminiscent of Eminem. I like the fact that they were adding in to your story. One piece of advice, though, I'd widen the stereo on the backing vocals, or pan them accordingly, to set them apart from the main vocals. It'll help the listener to distinguish between the two. By doing that, you'll involve the listener more, and make your story more dynamic. Also, as a thought, you might try to combine your dubstep and hip hop. By trying new combinations like this, you can get great results. I've got a track or two that do that, and it's the foundation of my band, All Medical Procedures.
Keep it up, man.
~CV

Ctheconcept responds:

yeah man thanks, Thats something I've been bobbling back and forth.

For your first go at dubstep, I think this is pretty decent. I've never used Garageband, but if it is clanky like ElectroLord said, then more props to you for working this out in it. He's right that you should add a melody. Try to focus it a bit more on the build up, if you can, and then go crazy during the drop. A few instruments can go a long way, say a pad and lead on top of the bass and the drums. That should take care of the buildup. Then you can pretty much break all the rules when you drop the bass. Trust your ears, for the most part.

Keep working on it, my man! I look forward to hearing more from you.
~CV

Ctheconcept responds:

Wow dude thanks means a lot! Yeah i'll deff work with what you told me.

It seems off beat. Kind of off kilter. I like it in its experimental value, though. It's always good to play around with new styles, I do it all the time myself. If you can fix the timing issues it might stand up better.

Ctheconcept responds:

yeah thanks man, I have to disagree it is on beat, but I get what your saying, This is a differant style of dubstep. This track is more hard rock kinda vibe. Thanks for the review, and if you check out my first one, you can obviously see how much better ive gotten.

I'm an artist who is working to expand his skill with all mediums.

Casey Venn @CaseyVenn

Age 36, Male

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Richmond, IN

Joined on 5/28/10

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